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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

Good dialogue. I liked the humorous exchange among the crew.

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Parrish Baker's avatar

Thanks!

I get all my military dialogue from a misspent youth watching WWII and Vietnam movies.

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

So it wasn't misspent then! I call that sort of endeavor research and try not to look smug.

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