Part 3
Good dialogue. I liked the humorous exchange among the crew.
Thanks!
I get all my military dialogue from a misspent youth watching WWII and Vietnam movies.
So it wasn't misspent then! I call that sort of endeavor research and try not to look smug.
Good dialogue. I liked the humorous exchange among the crew.
Thanks!
I get all my military dialogue from a misspent youth watching WWII and Vietnam movies.
So it wasn't misspent then! I call that sort of endeavor research and try not to look smug.